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Midnight Reverie
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Midnight Reverie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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- Midnight Reverie - Daydreams At mid-of-night... Midst a sprinkling of stars, I find you...your eyes a'glitter Seducing me with your celestial dance You, Mars to my Venus, melt me As Luna softly smiles At mid-of-night Daydreams ~Vicky L. Raynes When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (09-28-2003 05:43 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool! |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
"Seducing me with your celestial dance You, Mars to my Venus, melt me" oh that one would feel thus of me. Wow, woman. Peace, Joe from the big MT |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Hey Vicky, this is terrific! “At mid-of-night... Midst a sprinkling of stars” That is good! Well, I better let you get back to that seducing boogie woogie, Lars, I mean Mars is doing for you! WooHoo! Don’t stay up too late! Seriously, This Is Heavenly Vicky! Wonderful! Richy |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oooohhh, this is beautiful, Vicky....very sensual and dreamy feeling. You know that I love the dreamy ones and Rictameters, so I'm keeping this dreamy rictameter. LOL Well, goodnight, my friend  Hugs   |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Somebody ought to keep this girl up more often... This is great...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes   |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ah, my friend~ 'Tis beauty~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Vicky - lovely romantic write... BC |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful reverie, Vicky! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Touchingly rendered...the rictameter's a powerful thing, in hands like yours. But spread these words across any format and they'd be beautiful. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
So romantic.Ahhhh....... Love Bon-Bon  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There's nothing quite like that magic feeling!! So pretty Vicky~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Vicky, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, you truly have that Tinkerbell dust in you and the uplifting spirit of Lady Luna! (big hugggssssss) You always write such precious daydreams, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
oooh, prettyful... Very very very prettyful  Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely! Love, Margherita |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...You must have your seasons mixed up and think it's spring...this is so romantic. Lovely, it is! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
This was beautiful Vicky! Susan |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Daydreams At mid-of-night... Vicky, this is indeed a very descriptive phrase. Well done. We are all equal but we’re individually different |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Vicky... WOW is about all I can say. Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Dixie...thank you so much. *hugs* Joe...thank you...glad you enjoyed this. Peace back to you, my friend. *hugs* Richy...ya know?...you always make me smile with your enthusiastic replies...thank you for that. I'm glad you enjoyed this one...*smile* Ethel...thanks so much, my friend. You're always ready with a kind word and a smile. I appreciate you. *hugs* Nan...YES...SOMEONE ought to...LOL. Thank ya, my friend...*love and hugs* Sy...thank you, my friend...*smiles and hugs* Marge...thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. *hugs* Bill...thanks so much, my friend. *hugs* Denise...so good to see you here. Thank you...*hugs* Ed...you always have such kind words for me. Thank you for that. I'm glad you enjoyed this. *hugs* Bonnie...thank you much...*hugs* Lori...I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thank you...*hugs* Noah...you're always so sweet. Thank you, my friend...*hugs* Rhonda...thank you...*hugs*...glad you enjoyed it. Margherita...thank you, my friend. *hugs* Martie...you mean this isn't Spring? LOL Thanks for making me smile today. *love and hugs* Susan...thank you so much, my friend...*hugs* Ringo...nice to see your name here, my friend. Thank you so much...glad you enjoyed this. *hugs* Paul...your 'WOW' is much appreciated, my friend. Always good to see you...*hugs* Thanks so much everyone! Love and hugs to you all,  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Beautiful Vicky . . . I find you...your eyes a'glitter Seducing me with your celestial dance yes indeed she do xxoo |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
hmmm...yes....I echo all the above If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful.. Reverie is one of my most favorite words.. it catches my eye, just as your writings do |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
beautiful words, loved this. Jason |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
my kind of dreaming... great write... hugs, g "Now would you mind if I bared my soul / If I came right out and said you're beautiful..." B. Adams |
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