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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-09-28 01:22 AM

My Sweet Lady Jane

Elizabeth Allen was her name but
I called her My Sweet Lady Jane.
She was quite a bucket of joy,
succulently delicious ever
since she discovered boys.
She liked to get on back
down by the railroad track,
where she'd meet me pondside
under the willow tree to discuss
liquor and travel and me.
She looked a lot like Dolly
Parton to a young man like me.
She was about 23 but for some
odd reason she'd already
traveled the whole wide world
and found herself liking me.
I liked her too...I was 22 and
when the sun went down and the
moon came around me and her would
settle down into that cozy swing
neath the tree, just Lady Jane and
me, and a big bottle of Jim Beam.
We'd hold hands and settle in
and she'd start sharing beautiful
stories of every place she'd been,
and after a while I'd feel like
I had been there too cause Sweet
Lady Jane would tell stories that
had a way of hypnotizing you.
And inbetween we'd suck on that
big bottle of Jim Beam and everytime
she'd take a shot she'd say, "Do
you want a kiss or not." And then
I would kiss her real good, because
she liked to be kissed all over
and that was a desire I understood.
And I was glad that God had sent
Lady Jane to me to share stories
and kisses beneath that old
pondside willow tree.

JamesLee
September27
2003

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-09-28 01:23 AM

very good write,,,

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-09-28 03:38 AM

not your usual style...I like it!

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2003-09-28 06:20 AM

Hey James I love it!

Cool little story and the visuals are neat.

Ah what a great night, a bottle of JB, Lady Jane and some real hot kissin.....yep a night to remember.

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2003-09-28 09:33 AM

James - a lovely time, a lovely romantic write...

BC

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-09-28 09:47 AM

James,

Enjoyed.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-08-11 07:46 PM

Thank you QJQ,, passing shadows, ethome, Bill and Seymour for the nice responses...James

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