Open Poetry #29 |
To Be Loved...Be Lovable |
Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
To Be Loved...Be Lovable By: Noah Eaton 9/27/03 Oh love, it's a most beautiful delirium It all must go, there's someone for everyone It's no lie to claim I finally understand Jesus significantly One is not a lover who does not love forever Convinced, I evince the Truth with spirit It won't be vanquished, it won't be relinquished Should I forget, you'll know I'll try again... "Blessed is the wooing That is not long a-doing." As we're all children of the morning Dancing in the snow and debris In at least one instance it's worth to have trust Every time you see the rainbow gesticulate And everything else seems to hibernate Oh, make hay when the sun comes shining! And it's okay to always cry just a little Because there's a smile within that solves the riddle And if each long day's night feels like some Pyrrhic victory You'll find out soon enough you've made more than you can see All it takes is some good karma and alacrity To keep your posture tight, and believe in heaven and thaumaturgy And it's OK when there's not much to remember Just as long as you remember deep down "Blessed is the wooing That is not long a-doing." As we're all children of the morning Dancing in the snow and debris In at least one instance it's worth to have trust Every time you see the rainbow gesticulate And everything else seems to hibernate This is all you need to see... You win some, you lose some And sometimes you just feel lucky There is no remedy to love, but to love more, I can see So now I will listen to the relic in my soul, singing, "Love will save us now, oh, love will save us now, right now!" Oh, love is a pleasant disease It's what helps me put my vocals at ease With God by my side, right by your side There's no stopping us, I perceive One is not a lover who does not love forever Convinced, I evince the Truth with spirit It won't be vanquished, it won't be relinquished Should I forget, you'll know I'll try again... "Blessed is the wooing That is not long a-doing." As we're all children of the morning Dancing in the snow and debris In at least one instance it's worth to have trust Every time you see the rainbow gesticulate And everything else seems to hibernate Now it's clear to me The way to love anything is to realize that it might be lost The way to love anything is to realize that it might be lost And I won't give up on love, realizing not to love may make it lost I said don't give up on love, don't ever let it become lost... I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (09-27-2003 06:09 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed this very much,, terrific,,
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Noah, you are a songwriter extraordinaire! I love the way you string words together. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh Noah...what a beautiful song of love!! It made me want to just get up and do a Happy, Happy Dance!!! Especially this verse....... You win some, you lose some And sometimes you just feel lucky There is no remedy to love, but to love more, I can see So now I will listen to the relic in my soul, singing, "Love will save us now, oh, love will save us now, right now!" Love and hugs to you, sweet Noah!! [This message has been edited by garysgirl (09-27-2003 06:52 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Noah Your words were so uplifting and very encouraging. Take care........Sue Picture by Josephine Wall I am in motion |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Noah "To Be Loved....Be Loveable" Sounds so simple, but we all know it's not. Humans just aren't always loveable...but to love in spite of that...now that is love! Your sweet nature shines in this, Noah...very beautiful and spirit filled! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
To Be Loved...Be who you are! And it's okay to always cry just a little Because there's a smile within that solves the riddle That put a smile on my face...Hope that doesn't mean that tears are coming later to solve the riddle!!! lol, jk...Tears are inevitable anyway. But at least there's always a smile... Loved this Noah. Keep 'em comin! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Shouldn't this be true of all of us? This should apply to all. Lovely pictures that always adds so much beauty to these. I wish I knew how you do that. Shara~ Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! [This message has been edited by SharaRose (09-27-2003 08:40 PM).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Oh, this is both delicate and powerful! Wonderful write! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Noah - another excellent write... BC |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Noah~I could imagine a tune with this...this was incredible, and i love the title! "Vision without action is a daydream. Action without vision is a nightmare." -Japanese Proverb |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
noah, as you often do, you brought tears to my eyes with this wonderful piece of work I swear it's as though you write pure heaven, this was beyond beautiful. i truly am speechless. take care amy p.s. beautiful graphics too! "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You truly have a beautiful soul, dear Noah. TO LOVE FOREVER ... yes and unconditionally always. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very, very nice... Made me think of the thought, if I could find the perfect woman why should she want me, a man far from perfect, so I'll just look past the inperfections and settle for a woman...however, there is a difference between a perfect woman and a woman that is perfect for me...James |
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