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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Before there was language antiquated herbivores roamed we fed them greenery waiting for the Earth to cool to form itself Somewhere inside of me resides this memory as a child, forgotten but not lost completely Upon my hand, the scent right palm speaking of underbrush and silt Exactly how it smells after a rainfall . . . My soul begs to love you as does your own in return The fireside smoke spirals calling us home the place of our birth once again [This message has been edited by littlewing (09-29-2003 12:42 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Holy..wow.. I'm so..impressed with this.. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful...just beautiful |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Very nice |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Sue, it doesn’t surprise me that you are able to reach so far down, and connect with Mother Earth, on this level! What a meaningful and significant quality that is! This was very spiritually touching! Way to go Sue! Richy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - a'hhhhh yes, you are with words from your pen. Nicely done... BC |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, Sue. It's good to see you here, Lady!  Loved your poem...it's beautiful.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Well done Sue, beautiful writing. Jason |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Nice writing suz...it is warm and nostalgic...thank you for the words... Goldenrose. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Talk about reaching out for this one... very well, Sue. You have convinced me, once again, to put the pen away... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you so very much Meg (Holy wow Batman . . . sorry couldnt help it) Thank you Helen *smile* Hey Foxy thank you Richy - you always have such beautiful words for me . . . thank you so much and yes, you do see, don't you? *smile* Bill, my one true fan *smile* of my smile, always . . . thank you Thank you Ethel, you convinced me . . . *smile* Thank you Jason, as are yours Hey Phil, nostalgic yes you got it! thank you Karilea, you obviously need sleep because you are blabbering up there *sheesh* I can only strive to be half of what you are Thanks guys xxoo thank you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful, touching write, dear Sue. Loving you, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My Dear Sue, your wings may be little, but you soar high with spiritually moving poetry such as this...  Fly high, fly free, fly often, Linda |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LittleWing~ I came in reading this morning, looking for quality ... my, my, my - did I ever find it in this thought~ 'Upon my hand, the scent right palm speaking of underbrush and silt Exactly how it smells after a rainfall.' Thank you for being a poetess~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is a beautifully fitted window that allows a glimpse of an entire universe. Primeval, lush, gentle and savage, all at the same time. Stunning and simple, and simply eternal. Thanks for sharing this. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Okay..that's it..I'm throwing my pens out the window! Amazing write Sue...just amazing! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"My soul begs to love you as does your own in return" Okay is it just me or do you get better and better? It is a joy to get to read you...thank you for that piece of joy. Susan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sue...The earth holds so many memories...she read your palm and gave you back yours, spirit filled! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sue, I don't blabber. Blather, perhaps, but not blabber. I only WISH I could get some good sleep. Came back for a second read. SEE...? |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes! In a time, before there was language... There was this. Love you, Lady  |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I see a shift in your writing littleone and I'm loving it. The structure, the imagery.....exceptional! Maree P.S keeping it. fate is not just |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
In the time before language before we leaned on this too inadequate idea of grunting given meaning There was a man and a woman Who knew what the eyes spoke of And could divine truth from a touch Most excellent, M'Love! ~A man |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I like dinosaurs. they...interest me. you always write things that get me thinking  And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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mytuesdaywishes Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 254a voice from the musicbox |
very touching... and even when everything was wrong, and we were mad at the world, it was still beautiful. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I just love when those natural aromas fall upon us all and we can still smell that perfume through the day! It truly is the gift in the jasmine rain, the lilac afternoons and mint evenings! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Upon my hand, the scent right palm speaking of underbrush and silt Exactly how it smells after a rainfall . . ." Oh my, Sue... You are writing some seriously awesome poetry, me sis. I absolutely LOVE it. This?...and you?...beautiful... When the power of love overcomes the |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Margherita - and from such a daughter herself . . . Linda . . . what a beautiful reply - thank you so much and yes a little wing for sure *smile* Marge, thank you for being so kind to me ahh icey YES YES you got it - YES exactly - thank you so so much Ok Nancy - go to Karilea's house and the both of you get your heads on straight *smile* but thank you Susan, it is just you LMAO thank you so very much ahh Martie YESSS indeed she did Kari? needed that bit o sun on my face - thank you again (go get your pen Lady) Love you too Eddie *smile* Maree - it is the one up there - above you in the post - all hid fault *smile* thank you Ed? man abruptly shifts at the slightest of sound he tinkers with rock and fire looking skyward a tapestry of life before him unyeilded power before him at his hands he gave without thought nor reason but from a primal innate yearning all that he had learned to the one who knows the only one who sees as he does ~~woman Liz, if I get you thinking, then I scare myself because that mind of yours is running on petrol . . . thank you tuesday - Hey welcome, missed your entrance - thank you so much Hey V! Thank you Thank you so much Noah, you know I just adore that smell, the rainfall brings me back . . . Vicky, that is the most beautiful reply. Thank you so much, my sis, as I learn from those around me *smile* Thanks guys xxoo thank you |
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