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GypsyGirl
Junior Member

since 2003-09-21

Posts 29

0 posted 2003-09-21 03:53 PM

Fall (A Haiku)

Fall is coming soon
The leaves will then be changing
Falling from the trees

9-21-03

[This message has been edited by GypsyGirl (09-21-2003 04:04 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-09-21 04:00 PM

(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a most beautiful debut, I love it! The leaves may be falling from the trees soon, but autumn has a special character of comfort all to itself also, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet GypsyGirl, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your colorful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet GypsyGirl, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-09-21 04:41 PM

I enjoy the Fall! There is a sense of anticipation in the air--and it is so crisp and fresh!

Yes, it's coming! And thank you for bringing it closer with your lovely haiku!

EA

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-09-21 04:42 PM

nice job Gypsy . . .
love your name
*smile*
xxoo

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2003-09-21 05:02 PM

Excellent portrayal of my favorite season, GypsyGirl!!! Well done, and a rousing 'Welcome to Passions' from this member!!! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-09-21 05:44 PM

nicely expressed,,,

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2003-09-21 06:08 PM

GypsyGirl~
Welcome to Passions~

I not only love the Fall ... I adore Haiku~
Nicely done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

7 posted 2003-09-21 06:09 PM

haiku is impressive for a first post. welcome, I hope to see more

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2003-09-21 06:21 PM

GypsyGirl - Welcome to Passions in Poetry - Your haiku is a great tribute to our changing seasons... We'll all look forward to seeing lots more of your work here at PiP...

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