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Timeless Love (Nightshade & Enchantress)
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Timeless Love (Nightshade & Enchantress) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach 
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Why is it I'm always just out of reach Will I fade from your sight like drawn hearts on the beach Is it true I will find you somewhere in time Perhaps, you're just fantasy like words in a rhyme Should I be brave and show you my heart Reveal inner feelings secret thoughts I'll impart Please, take my hand dance together on air Close with me this hour timeless love we will share. . Nightshade & Enchantress September 2003 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big angel friendship group hug) Yay! Oh Chris and Nancy, I just love seeing you two making a gorgeous sisterly duet, sweet friend, yay! This is soooooooo romantic and whimsical, sweet friend, this made me wish I had a girl to dance with tonight, yay, God Bless You Both, and may love always fill both your hearts, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Chris and Nancy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, Chris and Nancy this is so beautiful.... the words blend so well, just like a song. It's a keeper for me for sure. Hugs  Ethel |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Noah & Ethel, thankyou both so much. My sister, Enchantress is here visiting and our muses seem to be in sync. lol. Hugs! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Chris....Back home and it sure was fun seeing you again. Thanks for everything, Teed! Love ya and miss ya~
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've got to know I was so thrilled to see the title...and the both of you excelled at leaving behind only the best...Bless your ever-lovin' hearts! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very romantic creative write...nice to see both of you working together in such harmony to produce this soft and beautiful poem...this is an awesome show of combined talent.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
You two write very well together. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
It must be wonderful to have a sister you can write with...I don't even have a sister. This is lovely! to you both. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Nancy & Chris - you two write beautiful together, just lovely... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ahhh...thanks everyone... It was a quick one night stop over but great to see my sister as always... we can pack more laughter into a few short hours than some do in a lifetime. Hugs~
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Chris and Nancy: what a beautiful blend of amazing writers . . . Is it true I will find you somewhere in time Perhaps, you're just fantasy like words in a rhyme Two very special women with a resounding message *smile* xxoo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Thankyou all for your kind responses. Writing with my sister is always a joy. Being with her is so much fun. Having her as not only a sister, but my best friend, is truly a blessing. I will be absent for a time...but you will all be on my mind and in my heart. Hugs!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Simply Magnifico! Very nicely done C/N.... or is that CNN? Great write girls.....you two always write well together... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed these tender words...James |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Two of our brightest lights shine together....you can see it for miles and miles. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
2 of my favorites together...h |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just gorgeous!  |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
For Chris and Nancy, Eternal Adoration Why is it I’m having trouble ever reaching back Missing every single train that’s rolling down the track Hoping that our destiny’s will suddenly appear Like some troubled waters that have suddenly turned clear Should I risk the dangers that true honesty can bring Hoping not to feel the way rejection always stings I wish that we could dance forever setting our hearts free Sharing all we have together for eternity You two are so inspiring! Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (09-28-2003 04:38 AM).] |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
enjoyed arthur |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nightshade & Enchantress Excellent, I'll be right over for tea.  |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
This is so beautiful  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful weaving you've given us... Excellent write, ladies! *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Once again we thank you all so very much! Richy! You're poetic reply is greatly appreciated. ~Hugs to you all!~ |
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