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Naming Tears
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Naming Tears |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I called myself weak You said "sensitive" "vulnerable" "open" tears burn the same but don't hurt |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
This isn't going to hurt... who are you trying to fool?  Liked your choice of words Jame A. Good poem~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
James, this is a good poem. Intersting.  Hugs  Ethel |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
tears are called...an ocean...h |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) I can agree with you we all feel weak every once in a while but also agree with her so much, as you are a sensitive and strong spirit and it shows how special you are and how you will rise! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Jamie...A word can change the meaning, even of a tear. |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Martie, I have a feeling you know the truest meanings of all such words. Bless you, Mistletoe. Yes, it is the light of love that shows us all the way. Oh, Slick One, what am I going to do with you? A tear can seem like the ocen, but the ocean is really just a tear. Gary's....knowing now the caliber of what you write, that's praise indeed, coming from you. You got me, Blues. It's hypnosis, I do admit it! But a little hypnosis is not such a bad thing... let me show you; just lie down on my couch, and..... |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Beautiful. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Yes... their names do make a difference... for how we're perceived affects how we view ourselves. *S* Beautiful write! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aye, 'tis always in the eye of the beholder, and with names such as these... the salt disappears... and the sting is gone. |
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