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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Dusk paints gold bars between pylons in a flash of green Comical bulbous silhouettes bulge in aging barnacle houses Sunrise - the whoosh of womb lulling to slower beats no people-sounds rupture rapture lost ones rolled burrito-style into dunes until the flies come to play mist-sand-gulls swirl in booming chorus and scrolls in bottles sleep in red tides. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
"and scrolls in bottles sleep in red tides" what words would be written and stowed to float away..and what wisdom or heartache would we learn? as always Cor... you do it well... very well |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I like the picture you've painted in this one. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ 'no people-sounds rupture rapture Did ya' know I could just hear the hush ? Lovely, lovely~ Were I to find your scrolls in a bottle awash on the shore I'd know a contented poetess-in-thought left a message of beauty forevermore~ You are a lovely, lovely read, my friend~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I love piers. I spent countless hours in my youth, gazing at the sea, fishing for the truth. I wish I was on one right now. Looking at the waves below. The wind in my face. Lost in the moment of life, and natures secrets. And all things, enticing and wondrous... Very Inspiring Corinne! Thank You, Richy |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Your palette is full today... and the answer to one of your recent queries? Put your name in that column...  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What a beautiful peaceful scene painted with such vivid word pictures. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Sunrise - the whoosh of womb lulling to slower beats amazingly pretty, thank you |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Cor, The way you see the world astounds the reader. Such a beautiful soul paints for us here. TD |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
An ominous finish, me thinks. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I haven't been on a pier in years, but this brought back some wonderful memories.Much enjoyed.  Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Corinne, I just love the dazzling imagery in this, sweet friend, you make more than messages in bottles wash out from the colorful tide but bubbles and sunlight as well, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Corinne, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you all for your wonderful, warm replies! It's appreciated more than you know! Core |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how descriptive! love it! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks Passing Shadows! Was surprised to see this one pop back up again! Corinne |
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