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Morning Love
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Morning Love |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Morning Love Kiss me softly darling Jasmine oh my heart begins to stir when your searching lips deliver sweet delight that makes me quiver from the warmth of your lips pursed. Kiss me deeply darling Jasmine when the light returns to earth. Chorus: There's is moonlight in the evening there are stars that glow above but there is nothing like the feeling I get with you in morning love. Take my hand and all my wishes upon your breast when morning comes. Take me where my dreams won't perish across the hills of love I cherish and count my heart-beats one by one. Drink my passion darling Jasmine while our romance greets the sun. Rep Chorus: Tag: Just you and I darling Jasmine You and I when the morning comes There can be no greater pleasure Than you and I and morning love. you and I and morning love...........fade [B][/B] © Eric True The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I do believe I'd give my eye teeth to hear this one... |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nice... if it hasn't been put to music..it should be... enjoyed... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Eric, Excellent write.  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Karilea I appreciate the wish and I'm trying to make it come true. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Cpat thanks and yes it will be put to music in the future. I appreciate the read and the response. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah Eric you charm the songbirds right out of the trees with this one... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are one poetically romantic lyricist!  To morning love!  EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely simply beautiful |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Love to hear this one...beautiful! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...I would love to hear this beauty too...please.  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,,, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eric, with the scent of Jasmine in my nostrils and the words of you on my lips, I have found a space to smile in reminisce. Thanks you. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I long so much to hear another audio file of yours singing one of your lovely songs, sweet friend, you really got to get these songs on a gold or platinum record immediately, yay! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is so cool! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hello Eric love the chorus...it's perfect "There's is moonlight in the evening there are stars that glow above but there is nothing like the feeling I get with you in morning love." M |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks so much to everyone that replied to this piece. I sure appreciate the responses. I will do my best to get a comment out to all of you. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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n2dmystic Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253beyond the doors of perception |
a beautiful sensitive piece. I loved it. thanks. Peace, Joe in the big MT |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh my goodness, Eric...this is a beautiful love song.... Like the others, I would love to hear it to music, too. Hugs Ethel |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ETHome~ ALWAYS a pleasurable read, my friend~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Joe, Ethel and Marge....I appreciate the kind words. Glad you could drop in for a moment. Eric The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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