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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2003-11-22 10:43 PM



There are times in lathered fear
When insecurity leaves hollow void
That shadows the tether of the heart

Where light began descent on light
Then fed itself into the darkness
And yet

Each time I linger far too long upon the ledge
It is you I conjure here, to curl within
And you that sparks my courage to refuse
The crash and burn

Copyright Kkh 11/22/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2003-11-22 11:00 PM


It's good to have someone to count on. I especially like the last line of this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-11-22 11:17 PM


Each time I linger far too long upon the ledge
It is you I conjure here, to curl within
And you that sparks my courage to refuse
The crash and burn


Yes, it is wonderful to have someone to
encourage us.
Hugs  
Ethel


Magnus
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3 posted 2003-11-22 11:25 PM


Narrow,  this lofted ledge,  high among the
clouded peaks...  Sparse,  'cept a lone
weathered tree,  limbs outstretched to
grasp...upon the slip.   May your journey
always have this weathered tree..as you
step cautiously through life.

Nicely done K.  Excellent write.

Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-11-22 11:52 PM


He sounds like a 'good knight'.

Softly expressed.


EA

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-11-23 04:10 AM


well said!
Margherita
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6 posted 2003-11-23 08:13 AM


I love your vision of summoning The Knight.
Someone to cherish like a jewel.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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