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Open Poetry #29

the no-time of a bathroom

duncan idaho
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since 2003-11-14

Posts 70
dune

0 posted 2003-11-22 05:33 PM

i dropped out of sight
in the bathroom wall
leaped to the bulbs
and crawled back to.

damn, that hurt.

saw myself a sharp
% flea of me. nothing more.
saw myself flexing rigid
muscles of useless organic
flesh. and I cringed
at my disability.............#
living. in that period.
dot of me and dot of
you
doesn't really matter too much
somehow, i'm still here and so am
I.
so there you I am.
an observation of me, observing what I observe.

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2003-11-22 08:27 PM

Did write a poem once called "The Dot" and another about viewing the nearby world from an ancient outcrop in Victoria, Australia...quite like the aspect of being able to see oneself from the outside....and as objectively as this life permits...welcome to Passions and keep the ideas flowing

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

2 posted 2003-11-23 11:51 PM

looks like a mirrow examination to me

this is amusing, I like it!

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-01-28 02:21 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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