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Open Poetry #29

Treat Me Nice

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-11-21 11:39 PM

Treat Me Nice

So now you want to treat
me the way I've always
wanted to be treated.
With dignity and respect
and a positive flow of energy.
This is the love that I desire.
This is the true meaning
of love to me.
Truthfully nothing
less will do.
If you say you love me
than let your actions
follow through.
Treat me nice and
perhaps I will fall
in love with you.

JamesLee
November20
2003

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

1 posted 2003-11-22 01:03 AM

Awh...this is so sweet! The perfect guideline for what it takes is so simple but sometimes too obvious. I loved it!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-11-22 04:11 AM

This is so sweet, and asks nothing more than we all want, respect, and dignity. Nice!

Love,
Terri~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-22 04:52 AM

ah, to fall in love so easily....those days are so gone for me

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2003-11-22 08:45 AM

so true...love is nothing without actions to back up the words..being a writer/poet..words can sometimes be words..but actions speak louder than words..actions seal the love..making it real..truth!

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-12-16 11:22 PM

Thank you azblone, SharaRose, passing shadows and A Romantic Heart...yes, its so easy to lie...actions tell the real story...James

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