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Chrissysue
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since 2003-11-21
Posts 23
Nebraska

0 posted 2003-11-21 08:52 PM



I kissed you and whispered goodbye
I turned to leave before you could cry
I've always lived for you
Lived for all that you do
Craving just one touch
Wanting for only this much
You drained my love from me
Wanting me to be all I could be
For you..
Now I whisper soft, goodbye
Please I beg you not to cry
My heart still longs for love
That wish that you deprived me of
If you reach out to me now
I'll live out my inescapable vow
to you
I'm pleading, please let me go
If you ever loved me, let me grow
Here I'll spend my life in pain
Hating sunshing, I'll long for rain
Say goodbye now and set me free
And I will be all I can be
Without you

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ice
Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404
Pennsylvania
1 posted 2003-11-22 11:05 AM


Chrissy
Such a heart wrenching poem...But all of life must be written of in our art, and I applaud your efforts to paint a picture of your distress...

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-11-22 01:34 PM


bittersweet...very true to my life here...sad but needed
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