Open Poetry #29 |
drumming in life |
Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
through the conundrums of all that is sounds of life enter like songs of rustling leaves drumming in thoughts in wavy rhythms spreading sure-footed beats of priceless joy that’s when the newborn cries in sparkling bundles of free-flowing energy while young lungs breathe gusts of fresh airs, generations of elders celebrate: the future that is here [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (11-21-2003 03:56 PM).] |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
You sir are a master of words and thoughts.I loved every wrod of this.A new beginning, a new life, a new force to be heard and seen.Wonderful. Crystal |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
You paint with a steady brush, my friend. Excellent work here. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
It is a cycle always..and we are reminded of it and of the miracles..as well as the joys... with reminders such as this.. well done my friend.. well done indeed. |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
The cycle of life. Very sweet thoughts. Love, Terri~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
I do enjoy looking out through your eyes. I'm enthralled by the way you look at things. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Again, as always, fantastic!! I especially love this stanza and the final statement..."the future is here." that’s when the newborn cries in sparkling bundles of free-flowing energy Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I am refreshed and renewed by your POV, Sudhir. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done! Thank you for the uplifting today! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thanks for joining in the celebrations... regards sudhir |
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