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A Day |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
As the dawning sun sets Ends another night of rest We wake up and begin our day Stretching and yawning in every way It's time for the kids to arise It's time for us to open our eyes Time to get ready for work Time to find that little quirk Time for the kids to get ready for school For them to find all of their tools Now we rush through breakfast The day has approached and no more rest We rush quickly out the door As we hug the kids once more As we arrive at home each night The kids begin their little fights It's time to fix dinner and get ready for baths Help with the reading, the spelling, and the math A little time for t.v. and a little talk Or maybe even a small walk And then it's back into bed With another I love you said Close our eyes and go to sleep Another dream we dream to keep Crystal |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Dreams of life are great ain't they,, you expressed the typical day great,,, |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
..and when the kids are grown you will miss all that. your poem put me at rest.....thank you!......Larry |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gosh, did you ever stir up a lot of memories for me! Hectic, beautiful memories. Our children grow up soooooo fast! Enjoyed what for me was a very nostalgic poem!--watercolour memories of the way we were...  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
QJQ:Yes they are  Larry:Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it.I know I will miss so much when my children leave home.It just seems lately there's no time for even a moment for me.Oh well my time will come soon enough, until then I revel in the wonder that my children bring to me.  Crystal |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Linda: I hope they were good memories.Even when I have not even one moment for em in my day, I fall into bed and smile knowing that I've given my self to my family, my children, my friends, my work, and my home and shared my heart. Crystal |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
My friend, I think you penned some of the most wonderful times a family has to share...the ordinary everyday life, that turns into memories that will make you smile! Loved this...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sunnyone:Glad you enjoyed.It is within these memories that my heart will cherish forever. Crystal |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Crystal, I am so happy that you have such a special loving family to give all your heart too, sweet friend, I believe children give us the most special memories and I dream in the future to have a family of my own to love! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Crystal, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Crystal~ A sweet penning of life's joys~ Yes, to enter slumberland 'knowing' they are all safe and sound and in angelic keep~ Nicely written dear lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Crystal A lovely day in every way. Enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Crystal this was so very pretty, thank you |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..angelblueyes../\..indeed; you said it quite well..i enjoyed reading.. ../\..Spiros ----------------- [This message has been edited by Spiros Zafiris (09-26-2003 09:56 AM).] |
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GypsyGirl Junior Member
since 2003-09-21
Posts 29 |
Yes, this is the way the days go. Kinds grow up so fast, and before you know it, they are all grown. Then, they leave home. But, those precious memories are still there. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Crystal, a typical day lyrically painted. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Noah:Thank you my sweet friend.Yes, my children are my life and my breath,my heart and my soul.When it sems all hope is lost I can look at them and findthe courage and the strength to go on. Marge:Thank you.Knowing they have the anels to guide them, is a peace that' greatly recieved. Seymour Tabin:Thank you, glad you enjoyed. LeeJ:Your welcome.I'm glad I could share it with you. Spiros Zafiris:Glad you enjoyed.Thanks. Crystal |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
GypsyGirl: I so agree.My memories will live on inside me as long as I breathe.:squeze: Kethry: Thank you my friend. Crystal |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Crystal - very nice poem of memorable times -you write so well of your memories - Paul |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Goodknight:Thank you.I only write what I share and feel.Me emotions sometimes are part of my downfall. Crystal |
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