Open Poetry #29 |
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Sun to Moon (Haiku to you, sweet Tanka) |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Sun Sun bleeds softly down, Casting silent shadow spears. Into dusk, he speaks. To Moon O! Sweet Moon, 'tis thee Passing in appointed rounds Dost thou need? Need me! Strong Sun with shadowing might, Thou art seen in me tonight. [This message has been edited by steavenr (11-23-2003 02:12 AM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How very very lovely... Congratulations on becoming a full member! Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
This is absolutely beautiful. My goodness, you write in such vivid and lovely images. Me thinks I can learn a great deal from you, Sir. Wonderful work! So glad you decided to join us. Patricia |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
ah....sigh...so lovely... ~ARH ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From the Sun to the Moon to this reader's soul. ![]() Simply beautiful... ![]() EA |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just Lovely ! hugs, Chris "At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." |
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