Open Poetry #29 |
Tell me you love me |
Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
Tell me you love me And I'll lock it Deep inside my heart When cold winds blow All I have to do is look inside To feel safe and warm Even when you're gone Those words Are so near Holding me keeping me company On dark and lonely nights. When you're here whisper those sweet words Once again and I'll know forever Isn't long enough To be in love you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I Love YOU! What??? Oh, you didn't mean me? Oh well, perhaps to know that we all care will make you feel just a tad better, if only from a few mere woman from this poetry web site,,,just know that you loved! Astounding write my friend...and may love fill the air around you |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Awww, sounds like a loving heart cry. This is so sad, but it's sweet. Love, Terri~ |
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Felinus Junior Member
since 2003-08-06
Posts 20Princeton |
beautiful, very romantic. exactly what most women would love to hear |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Awww... I wish someone would right something like that for me. For a woman to have you as their significant other is VERY lucky and blessed. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee beat me to it! Anyahoo, Dear Brad, WE all love you! Soft, warm and cosy feel to your poem. Gentle love, true love, lasting love... May you have all that your heart desires. EA |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Any poems on love is like a magnet to my heart....very romantic words..tender... ~ARH |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi Brad...I respect you! (Laughing out loud!) Sorry my friend it would just feel too weird to say, "I love you," to another guy. Still I do like your poetry. I like this poem a lot since it does touch on such a tender subject. Well done! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
yep... forever can never be long enough... regards sudhir |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is simply romantic.She's lucky to have your heart and love. Crystal |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
thank you |
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