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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-11-21 08:02 AM



Tell me you love me
And I'll lock it
Deep inside my heart
When cold winds blow
All I have to do is
look inside
To feel safe and warm

Even when you're gone
Those words
Are so near
Holding me
keeping me company
On dark and lonely nights.

When you're here
whisper those sweet words
Once again
and I'll know forever
Isn't long enough
To be in love you.


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-11-21 09:06 AM


I Love YOU!  What??? Oh, you didn't mean me?

Oh well, perhaps to know that we all care will make you feel just a tad better, if only from a few mere woman from this poetry web site,,,just know that you loved!

Astounding write my friend...and may love fill the air around you

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-11-21 09:46 AM


thank you
SharaRose
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3 posted 2003-11-21 10:54 AM


Awww, sounds like a loving heart cry. This is so sad, but it's sweet.
Love,
Terri~

Felinus
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4 posted 2003-11-21 11:18 AM


beautiful, very romantic.   exactly what most women would love to hear
Hockeychick19
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5 posted 2003-11-21 01:49 PM


Awww... I wish someone would right something like that for me. For a woman to have you as their significant other is VERY lucky and blessed.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2003-11-21 02:06 PM


Lee beat me to it! Anyahoo, Dear Brad, WE all love you!

Soft, warm and cosy feel to your poem.

Gentle love, true love, lasting love... May you have all that your heart desires.


EA

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7 posted 2003-11-21 02:10 PM


Any poems on love is like a magnet to my heart....very romantic words..tender...

~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

EvocativeVerse2
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8 posted 2003-11-21 02:43 PM


Hi Brad...I respect you! (Laughing out loud!) Sorry my friend it would just feel too weird to say, "I love you," to another guy. Still I do like your poetry. I like this poem a lot since it does touch on such a tender subject. Well done!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2003-11-21 03:04 PM


yep... forever can never be long enough...

regards
sudhir

Brad Majors
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10 posted 2003-11-21 03:28 PM


thank you
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11 posted 2003-11-21 03:51 PM


This is simply romantic.She's lucky to have your heart and love.
Crystal

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12 posted 2003-11-22 02:38 AM


thank you
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