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Open Poetry #29

the stay of a stay is…

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-11-21 02:47 AM

sometimes a stay

time caged in an instant
a fancy
reflections more crystal
than real

a stay
on scale
measured by its patience
to stay

the process is sacrifice
hope is ritual

gone

forgotten

fled moments
hate back
in memories.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-11-21 02:50 AM

why do you always make me think at two o'clock in the morning?

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

2 posted 2003-11-21 04:33 PM

Man, this is so solid! You have PRESENCE.

We don't see this kind of style in PIP nearly as often as we should.

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James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2003-11-22 10:58 AM

"fled moments
hate back
in memories."

Gold. This is gold. It's not often I have a single image change my way of thinking, but I believe I just did.

~~J

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-11-22 11:01 AM

nice precise visuals

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-11-22 11:05 AM

pandonov,
The spirit flies and the skies the limit,
enjoyed.

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