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Night Lace . . . . . . haiku
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Night Lace . . . . . . haiku |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass 
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No moonlight, no stars, no wavesounds, no frail leafsong; the night's lace unmarred. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
No moonlight, no stars, no wavesounds, no frail leafsong; the night's lace unmarred. ~ The stillness in the depths of darkest night with nary a sight nor sound. I can see and hear the nothingness...   EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can see that...beautiful |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
ratleader, This is absolutely beautiful! It brings me back to moments with my dad. As a youngster, he taught me how to clear my head by closing my eyes and imagining total darkness and silence in my head. Now that you've brought it to my attention, darkness and silence are kinda lacy--that little extra to add the beauty to an item. You have such good perspective on things! BTW, thanks for commenting on my last post about the My little office, or whatever it was called. After checking in this a.m., I re-read it and revised it quite a bit. I'd appreciate any tips you can give me. Thanks again for your thought provoking words. Sadelite |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed~ Inspirationally beautiful~ Stretched across the night in sigh Unstroked by glitter~ Thank you for this jump-start on my poetic day~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I've just read your comment on Bon Bon's lovely tribute to you....you'd better not go anywhere, I would get sick and die from lack of reading your words, and if there's anyone who doesn't like you, let me atem! How's that for suckin up and keepin you and your writes...hehehehheeh! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yum! I'll take it! I've just been on the down side of things lately, having some things not go my way and letting that blot out the thought of other things that have gone very much my way here.... and the downers have been winning that tug-of-war.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've defined still... and done so beautifully. *S* I like this very much, my friend. *S* |
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eor Senior Member
since 2002-09-26
Posts 959blues & greys |
you have a wau wiht haiku's, everyone i have seen has just been absoutly beautiful... "So what befalls the flawless? |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Love the title. The first thing that came to mind was Midnight Lace, candles and soft music. Good one.RL. Love Bon-Bon  PS, If you get a chance read "Power Moguls" you may find it interesting. See Ya Bon |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Well done! Thank you for sharing it. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
The stillness of the night comes peace and tranquility... hope your downers become uppers..bright sunshine days I wish for you... ~ARH  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is lovely. Quite lovely. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is wonderful.  Crystal |
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