Open Poetry #29 |
Vespertine's Calling... |
Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
Sometimes I hear the evening’s falling, Propitious in her silent calling, When broken is the sweat of day, O’ how the moon shines cross her way Would it be that night’s caress, Would softly swirl as silken tress, On weathered brow in rich profusion, Unguent oil of dark’s illusion. Beneath the stars, beneath night’s heaven, Upon the glow of Sister’s Seven, Rises eventide to greet me, In the gloaming, as comes to meet me, I wait for her in trepidation, fearing bite of her temptation, But yet I ache of evening’s falling, Propitious in her silent calling. [This message has been edited by Tim (11-21-2003 12:24 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sweeeeeet |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
well done! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tim~ Softly stunning~ 'Would it be that night’s caress, Would softly swirl as silken tress, On weathered brow in rich profusion, Unguent oil of dark’s illusion.' Oh yes ....~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Tim, A soft reply to the dew in the air. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tim, I swear you moved the clouds last night, and left me nothing but a very clear early morning sky before the dawn, and nothing but jewels to touch. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Silent thy words are not, shinning through the heavens, Your words are diamonds.... Ringing ever so sweetly, tenderly like bells, charming the hardest of hearts... True poet are thee...sir Tim! This maiden enjoyed thy lovely sonnet.. ~ARH |
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