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vandana
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0 posted 2003-11-19 10:34 AM



No
My love
I promise you
I will never leave you
Again
I promise you
Because I love you so
When I promise you
For everything I do
That is why
I will never leave you
Never leave you again
No
My dear
I will never do that
Because I love you so
And I want you near
Everytime
I see you
So
I will never leave you
I will never leave you
From bottom of my heart
I promise
I will never leave

[This message has been edited by vandana (11-19-2003 10:34 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-19 10:35 AM


ah.. such promises are tender and touching.. surely not to be ignored or disbelieved by the intended..

well done..

EvocativeVerse2
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2 posted 2003-11-19 10:53 AM


A very strong promise...not easily met. Well done!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Sunshine
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3 posted 2003-11-19 11:07 AM



Such a promise...
knowing you, Vandana,
I know you mean it.


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4 posted 2003-11-19 11:54 AM


A beautiful promise.

Eric

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-11-19 10:59 PM


Enjoyed...James
SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-11-19 11:09 PM


Lovely sentiments for the one you love.
Love,
Terri~

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7 posted 2003-11-20 07:33 AM


Very lovely Vandanna, and I know how much you mean this.  Hugs.
Tim
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8 posted 2003-11-20 08:10 AM


nicely written Vandana, enjoyed.
LeeJ
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9 posted 2003-11-20 08:35 AM


tremendously reassuring.
Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2003-11-20 08:54 AM


VanDana~
From your heart comes this beautiful promising~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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