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Open Poetry #29

I Will Never Leave You

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2003-11-19 10:34 AM

No
My love
I promise you
I will never leave you
Again
I promise you
Because I love you so
When I promise you
For everything I do
That is why
I will never leave you
Never leave you again
No
My dear
I will never do that
Because I love you so
And I want you near
Everytime
I see you
So
I will never leave you
I will never leave you
From bottom of my heart
I promise
I will never leave

[This message has been edited by vandana (11-19-2003 10:34 AM).]

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-11-19 10:35 AM

ah.. such promises are tender and touching.. surely not to be ignored or disbelieved by the intended..

well done..

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2003-11-19 10:53 AM

A very strong promise...not easily met. Well done!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2003-11-19 11:07 AM

Such a promise...
knowing you, Vandana,
I know you mean it.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-11-19 11:54 AM

A beautiful promise.

Eric

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-11-19 10:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-11-19 11:09 PM

Lovely sentiments for the one you love.
Love,
Terri~

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

7 posted 2003-11-20 07:33 AM

Very lovely Vandanna, and I know how much you mean this. Hugs.

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

8 posted 2003-11-20 08:10 AM

nicely written Vandana, enjoyed.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2003-11-20 08:35 AM

tremendously reassuring.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2003-11-20 08:54 AM

VanDana~
From your heart comes this beautiful promising~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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