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Of Dancing
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Of Dancing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Dancing I dance upon a teeterboard To equalize my minds accord To balance in the wind of din To stabilize an equal twin It is the game of life I speak The good the bad each little tweak The in, the out, the overall The cushion and the bounce and fall I try my best to plant my feet On either side or be discreet I cast my weight each day each way To pacify the game of play It is a drought of homespun tea A grace to dance the dance of we That opens up the door of fault To wash away the tear of salt I’m sure you sway a teeterboard Or do you still play shuffleboard? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Im thinking mine would be an ironing board...yayaya  I dance upon a teeterboard To equalize my minds accord To balance in the wind of din To stabilize an equal twin this verse is cooooooler than KEWL!! And so it the poet who wrote it.  *ww*    When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Have ya ever done the Quaalude two step?...good write Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Mothyme is up early this morning. And in a light mood and I hope you have a bright day. Think about our meeting on the Mississippi Quite ofen. Miss you. WWRS Toe Sounds familiar. LOL Hope all is well. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Good morning Sy. Well done!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Goodmorning Seymour Another good one, my friend..... as always it is. Have a good day today. Hugs  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio, Thank you and have a good one. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Thank you sweet and the top of the morning to ya. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
The game of life IS a teeterboard, no doubt about it. Good morning thoughts. ~K~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well shoot, I haven't broken anything in my life, so I may as well go for the teeterboard... Move over Sy... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Jump on, LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes, I think I'll have a go on the teeterboard Sy!  Have a wonderful day..much enjoyed the morning balance. ~Morning hugs & Tea, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Well we'll tetter after tea. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Mmm love it. But then you knew I would. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
EvocativeVerse2, Thank you so much. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I just loved this Seymour..fabulous writing! Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suetang Thank you so much for the read and like. vandana Glad you enjoyed. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Yepper life is like a tetter board at times. But sometimes I think I'm on a roller coaster. Right at the moment I think I'm on a very calming sofa. LOL. See Ya Bon-Bon  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Bonnie, Thank you for the read and reply. |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Wonderful rhythm...bouncy tune, and very good content....I especially like this stanza "It is the game of life I speak The good the bad each little tweak The in, the out, the overall The cushion and the bounce and fall" enjoyed reading this , Seymour _______ice ><> |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice Thank you, your answer is like an iced drink Which goes well in a warm climate. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yes Seymour, life is a dance of sorts. Sometimes I spin out of control and just have to rest a spell. Care to sit this one out with me and we'll chat over tea and ginger snaps? hugs, Chris |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, I'd be delighted. |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
What a fun read! And I love the ending! You are a true wordsmith my friend. Thank you for the thoughts! JD "The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
allamericanjoe Thank you for the smile. |
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