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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2003-11-18 10:59 PM



Scissor like branches
cut lattice patterns
across the paper sky;

the angels are sprinking
a bit of faith again,
before these yearning eyes.

© Copyright 2003 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
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1 posted 2003-11-18 11:08 PM


a bit of faith?  
is a good thing, yes?

I love that picture!!!
*smile*
ahh yes she finally rests
beautiful Michele
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-11-18 11:12 PM


and thank u suzieQ
for your preserverance to get it right...lol
i promise i'll keep this one on for a while...lol

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-11-19 03:16 AM


OMG Please do . .  lol

is ok I have the rest anyhow ready to go
*smile*
your welcome
xxoo

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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4 posted 2003-11-19 03:42 AM


I vote to keep the picture, a LONG time! Love it!

the poem was awesome too!

Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-11-19 10:03 AM


well done ma'am...
I like the form and the imagery...
now.. do it again..lol.. write!!

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279

6 posted 2003-11-19 10:24 AM


Love this...and the picture. Well done.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

vandana
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7 posted 2003-11-19 10:25 AM


nice
bklynboy
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8 posted 2003-11-19 07:33 PM


Love the picture...especially the tattoo. Got any others? Nice little poem!
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