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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-11-18 06:11 PM


Beautiful Kiss


I dream of her
in my arms.
Two hearts full
of bliss.

She smiles,
says she loves me.
We share a
beautiful kiss.

Later that night
in warm embrace
we caressed.

She told me
she loves me.
In her arms
I am blessed.


JamesLee
November17
2003

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
1 posted 2003-11-18 06:13 PM


beautiful James
may this always be
is a rare thing indeed
to feel such a blessing
xxoo

SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

2 posted 2003-11-18 06:14 PM


JamesMichael,

This is so sweet.

SG

Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-11-18 06:17 PM


well done
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-11-18 06:23 PM


OH!  This is SO beautiful James!!!!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
5 posted 2003-11-18 09:28 PM


Hello James

Your words were as smooth as silk and as sweet as honey.

"It is the passion that is
in the kiss that gives to
it its sweetness; it is the
affection in a kiss
that sanctifies it"

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
6 posted 2003-11-18 09:56 PM


this is a beautiful kiss,
Temptress
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Mobile, AL
7 posted 2003-11-19 01:11 AM


amazing what that can do, eh?


Lovely love poetry, James.

I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU!


ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India
8 posted 2003-11-19 03:43 AM


magic of love
            really lovely

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
9 posted 2003-11-19 03:58 AM


The ending ties this all up perfectly
Lovely, as always

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2003-11-19 04:37 AM


*big smile*
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