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Life's Incessant Ticker
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Life's Incessant Ticker |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Life’s Incessant Ticker Right to left unending, symbolic contractions shifting, Ever moving, sometimes changing, Relentless revisions, kaleidoscope of rainbows, Bringing joy or sorrow, gain or loss. Right to left unending, contracted symbols adjusting Ever moving, never changing, Impassive equivalence, grayscale of monochromes, Bringing boredom, malaise and discontent, Life’s incessant ticker continues in its ticking— The beauty of its change is in its viewer’s heart. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Amen to that last line! Great work, here, Steaven! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this reminded me of that little clicking box that you use when you are learning to paly the piano...I can't think of the name of it to save my life right now...just woke up, but I love this write, so true to life. Welcome to Passions!  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
passing shadows, I think you are thinking of a metronome. (The inspiration for this is the stock ticker that always runs above my browser,  )btw, thanks all for the comments. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a unique and creative write!  Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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