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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-11-18 08:57 AM

Risk The Moon

Words that speak of me
while caught in pleasure of others
on pages blue, lingering here or even there,
maybe in mind, of another watching.

And I, wondering, just what those eyes
can really see, rainbows streaking
or whispers of colors faint, randomly selected
to sweeten the view, simply.

A gift? A smile?
No strings attached, just the pleasure
of inspiration, a moment spent
to "pick-me-up" in real and I,
I return the favor in thanks.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-11-18 08:59 AM

What a pleasant way to say,
thank you.

Enjoyed this, m'dear.

Brad Majors

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since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-11-18 09:03 AM

well done

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-11-18 09:10 AM

Karilea, I'm still wondering who that was...?

anyway, I figured the message would be received

Thanks Brad *s

M

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-11-18 09:37 AM

"A gift? A smile?
No strings attached, just the pleasure
of inspiration, a moment spent
to "pick-me-up" in real and I,
I return the favor in thanks."

A very nice way of saying 'thank you'
Enjoyed this.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

5 posted 2003-11-18 09:44 AM

Nice - I liked it

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

6 posted 2003-11-18 10:53 AM

Another really good one. You're very talented.

~Kelly~

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2003-11-18 11:02 AM

there are no insignificant rainbows...
and this is a beautiful poem!

Rf

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2003-11-18 11:12 AM

Nancy, Copperbell and Kelly, thank you for the read and response.

And Robert thank you for the kind words that preceded these.

*s
M

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