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Dreaming Unorganized
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Dreaming Unorganized |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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My eyes heavy with thought behind the scenes, dreaming unorganized waking to panic. If only it would slide off me the weight the wait wishing to control what can't be wishing the aloneness would tire of itself and fade into the shadows of each night. "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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wintertao Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 366Okaloosa Island, FL |
another very nice pen, I'm enjoying your words this morn... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
some days I feel the weight/wait of the world on my shoulders...and then some days those dreams are halfway between here and there...strangest ideas sometimes  thank you M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"wishing the aloneness would tire of itself" Oh yes...what a brilliant line! "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Great write. I have to say a lot of times I feel the same way. ~Kelly~ Life is a gift so live it to the fullest! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
some dreams evaporate with morning light, while others linger...who knows exactly why? unsettling, deep write. Rf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I think that's one thing that never gets tired  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ "dreaming unorganized waking to panic." ~ "wishing the aloneness would tire of itself" ---M, love your unique way of expressing yourself!  Extra warm hugs, EA |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
loved your title...enjoyed the poem even more. I feel this way right now... I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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beckers716 Junior Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 39Ohio |
Excellent poem! I hope to be reading more from you! Only when all hope seems lost, can you hope to find yourself |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
''My eyes heavy with thought''...i know all too well of this feeling....sometimes we think a little too deeply....but there is no changing the habit of a lifetime...we must continue with the deep thoughts..they are shadows that creep into and out of our minds....thank you for the great words... Goldenrose. ''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity'' |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, it is odd how that some of our dreams can be remembered with every detail. Then, others leave as soon as we awake. Good writing, as always, my friend.  Hugs  Ethel |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Darn this os good nakdthoughts. Love it! Bump...back to the top it goes. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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