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Open Poetry #29

Now

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-09-25 06:59 PM

so hard
this

wait

if you
really
must

break it

finish
me
now

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-09-25 07:13 PM

I had a "now"
poem in my head

but,

it just

disappeared.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-09-25 07:22 PM

hi Jamie...is there ever really a now...if there is I haven't seen one...they must be verra verra fast, those critters!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-09-25 10:19 PM

I completely understand... dread is so often worse than deed... acid eating at our peace of mind.

You pack much to ponder into a few words... absolutely excellent!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-09-25 10:21 PM

Excellent write Jamie!
~Hugs~

~ I love your glances meeting mine
across forever or the room ~

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

5 posted 2003-09-25 11:36 PM

This is great form and a great write.
Crystal

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