Open Poetry #29 |
....forgotten.lines....(20 or less) |
QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
why do you keep acting it was you that lost the lines the scene is over [This message has been edited by QjQ (09-25-2003 07:43 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and the curtain closed |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gah, this is REALLY good! Library. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Excellent, Glenn! Love this one... When the power of love overcomes the |
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Mystic One Member
since 2003-09-14
Posts 134 |
Yes Nice |
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Insomniac Cat Member
since 2003-09-23
Posts 69The Land of the Dadaists |
Sweet! So much is said in so few words! |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
That is short, and wry, and I love the way you did it. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
into my library too Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Glenn, I'm really liking your thoughts you're putting into poems. This is really good, and I'm keeping it, too. Hugs Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Oh Glenn, this is so very heartfelt, sweet friend, it ain't over till its over, but the fact is, its over so the stage must be cleared! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Glenn, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Simply profound, Glenn.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
if the play is over, why was there no encore? Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a very good one, indeed! Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Q... What a pointed little arrow... Right to the heart of the matter. One of my favorite pieces of yours. TD |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
---Scene is over, curtain drops. The End. EA |
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JilGirl Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364Washington |
Golly, I thought THAT was just the rehearsal! Now, it's OVER??? GOLLY! 'Tiz feathers that make the bird - |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
And that's the end.yep yep. Crystal |
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