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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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And the smoke lingers drifting in slow circles in and around my eyes calmly killing my already dying mood its ongoing sentence tough to follow hard to hold onto harder to let go and I can't help but notice its lack of punctuation as I slur my own sentences back to back and end to end completely unlike myself but I can blend it all together as long as I can forget it all in the morning Bad monkey. |
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C? Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 190 |
I miss selfindulgance of alcohol sometimes |
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Pip Member
since 2001-09-14
Posts 59 |
I don't think it has a lot to do with drinking, myself. But, that's just me. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 bad monkeyOh, sorry, I really liked your write. I have the start of a long ago, morning after headache from the smokiness and blurred vision. Well done. Chris  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
 you're writing again...no duh, eh? giving this a boost. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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