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Open Poetry #29

Fortune

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

0 posted 2003-11-17 07:17 PM

Fortune

Your smile arrived first,
waited poised all through dinner,
a soft red fortune cookie
that promised good things
whether opened first or last.

You taste like good luck.

wintertao
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 366
Okaloosa Island, FL

1 posted 2003-11-17 08:00 PM

WoWsA! I love this !

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2003-11-17 08:16 PM

Deliciously sweet!

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2003-11-18 11:35 AM

Any time I read a poem and find myself smiling, it becomes a favorite. *S*

I like this very much, Jamie... *S*

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2003-11-18 08:43 PM

James...loved the feel of this one. One piece of advice...get this one out to a few publishers!!!! Great write

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-11-18 10:24 PM

oooooh, do I love this one? Yes, I am keeping it! Library bound it is. Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2003-11-18 10:50 PM

Dont ya just love it when the cookie is right....wonderful...words...
Lauren~

~~**~~

I had a dream last night
you came to me on silver wings of light
I flew away with you in painted sky
Was it real
Is it what you see,touch or feel

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2005-09-19 12:49 PM

Jamie.....I'm not sure how I missed this....I love fortune cookies!

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