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Open Poetry #29

That moment

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

0 posted 2003-11-17 03:34 PM

In a moment I am lost
in your eyes
in a second
I am lost in dream

For your eyes
are portals
to another world
another time

Where there is only
you and me
dancing for ever
in eternity

As a star beam
catches your eye
on this
this starry night.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-11-17 03:38 PM

beautiful write

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

2 posted 2003-11-17 03:41 PM

Dan you are on a roll today....and I am enjoying it!!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-11-17 03:41 PM

thank you

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-11-17 03:50 PM

"For your eyes
are portals
to another world
another time"

Love these words Brad...
Simply beautiful!
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

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