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Winters Embrace |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Imperfection follows me I long to be I seek to see I wish to walk with you not knowing fear peeking through in drifts of knowledge flurries of unknown I stumble on hoping for your hand to warm me, balance me, introduce me, to what it is I seek to see Sweep the hair from my face with gentle finger finding touch of lace I hide so well hold me in the love of winters embrace "if you won't let me fall for you |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
a lovely response to another's words, Susan M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, NOw that is a fine piece of lace.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Imperfection follows me I long to be I seek to see" Dear Susan ~*~ If you long to be And seek to see Then perfection Is what ye'll be! ~*~ ~ May you be held in warm embrace throughout all the winters of your life! Warm, loving hugs, Linda A beautiful poem from the heart of a beautiful woman.  [This message has been edited by Earth Angel (11-17-2003 03:56 PM).] |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
brilliant as always |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
tender wishes.. well written good work Susan. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sweep the hair from my face with gentle finger finding touch of lace I hide so well hold me in the love of winters embrace ======================= how lovely is that... and you know the moth is loving the rhymes.  such tender sincerety needs no allits either  When I'm with you my eyes are so wide ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful...the ending is perfect. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
sweetness , this poem could warm ya up in the tundra it is so hot .. true passion , very cool : ) |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my goodness. Susan this is lovely and going straight into my library. hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
The gift of honesty! Wonderful. |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
couldn't let this one fall away |
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Kazm Member
since 2003-11-13
Posts 99 |
Pretty, and a steam so deep. I hope some day to write as well as you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you, one and all! Your compliments are cherished. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
It's good to read your words again. These suit you well. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I loved the imagery in this, the sweeping away of the hair.... beautifully written longing. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"I stumble on hoping for your hand to warm me, balance me, introduce me, to what it is I seek to see" My hand is yours to take, to hold, to trust in time. I have nothing else to give but love. Let me... |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
So good I had to see it again |
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