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Keth
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0 posted 2003-11-17 02:19 AM


a cracked wall
three lines and a view
solid structure of
nothing and everything

a single triviality
outnumbered by
childish fiction
glowing sphere
designed to create
warmth with ice.

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-11-17 04:46 AM


wow
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since 2001-12-29
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2 posted 2003-11-17 06:19 AM


rookie eh? I sure wouldn't have guessed. Excellent, excellent

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