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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-11-15 03:42 PM

~I cannot wave
my goodbye
without you here to see the gesture

Volatile seasons
pushed me to graze skins

breast to bone...

cradling such heavenly torso
cost me lives

The prestigious
unveiled satin red of seep
~a picture of accidental fall

I am for all to see

I never long for hands bound
in promise of what neither will agree

..but for recovery
and mine
from you

~I don't want to talk about it

The haunt of instinct
to not know him out of harm
for rest of my days

mute to if he is here

if not in union
but in this state of alive

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2003-11-15 05:11 PM

Wonderful write. Enjoyed. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

2 posted 2003-11-15 05:32 PM

"Volatile seasons
pushed me to graze skins

breast to bone...

cradling such heavenly torso
cost me lives"

Your writing so often finds recognition with me, as I shake my head at the parallels. Excellent write Gemma.

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-11-15 05:50 PM

I cheated by coming in here. shh...don't tell the others

lava ya

sighs...such pretty poetry.

What about China? Have you seen the Great Wall?
All walls are great, if the roof doesn't fall.
-yorke/bjork

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-11-15 05:55 PM

You may not want to talk about it,
but you write of it with a flair.
Very well done, Gemma...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-11-15 07:30 PM

(smiles) A wise one wastes no words, and I believe you couldn't have said it better, yay! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, let the gesture be made and move on, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

6 posted 2003-11-15 07:37 PM

this is really amazing....WOW

Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2003-11-15 07:40 PM

Aww you, who would believe it anyway!!
Loved these lines most of all!!

I never long for hands bound
in promise of what neither will agree

..but for recovery
and mine
from you

Yea that!! Hugs, Gemma, Gemma~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-11-16 02:28 AM

yeah...you said it like I could not

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-11-17 09:31 AM

Beauitful writing, as always gemma

I never long for hands bound
in promise of what neither will agree

..but for recovery
and mine
from you

Liz. you cheater I saw that
(ehe)
xxoo

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

10 posted 2003-11-17 09:59 AM

Things I cannot talk about , so I write !!
you expressed feelings excellently Gem

Hope

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

11 posted 2003-11-17 10:02 AM

LOVE IT! Very well done. This is an exquisite piece of writing.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

12 posted 2003-11-17 11:06 AM

"The haunt of instinct
to not know him out of harm
for rest of my days"

I can not even begin to explain how very close to my own thoughts those lines are...

Gemma, this is outstanding!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

13 posted 2003-11-17 11:11 AM

"I don't want to talk about it" ~ but you just did, Dear Gem Drop ~ and excrutiatingly well...

~ I want all the pain and sadness gone from your life! ~ Swish, swish! Begone!

Warm loving hugs,
Linda

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

14 posted 2003-11-17 11:36 AM

Gemma... you always provide me food for thought and words to envy....

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

15 posted 2003-11-17 07:16 PM

This made me think of my ex-girlfriend who didn't give me a chance to say goodbye...last week I saw a woman that looked a lot like her and had some of the same mannerisms and I began to think of her again...a friend of mine saw her recently at a new place where she works and she asked him how I was doing and he said not to good...I do miss her...but I am doing fine...life goes on...James

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