Open Poetry #29 |
Beyond Chasm's Breach (With Nan Ness) |
Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Oh but to savor dew upon the trace and wind the vine in spiral quilling thought To touch this hand of soft refine and grace and steal their lips the wine so willing sought. Oh but to sip of passionate embrace, Unbounded vineyards’ sweet ambrosial scent. Embosomed o’er the realm in common place, Clandestine verse composing just intent For on the mome of waning moon's descent, before the wash of passion's heated gust. Released, one's ink now dries upon relent as heaving eyes betray his blemished lust. For naught sure visions met dare two entrust Unfeigned avow in essence one to each. Devotions bound as riven lovers must Horizons part yet held within hand’s reach. ` Within the dance of molten prance to breach A trammel's net betwixt two limbs traverse. His pining words, of her in his beseech. Of strawberry lips and unsullied verse. The nectar drawn of pome in sole converse Enscripting bonds in cosmic cast of spell Etched as poetic parables immerse In harmony of rhythmic ritornelle Oh cede to me thy ink from master's well and to one's sheet thy blood of flowing grace bequeathed to thee mine heart, in crimson swell, when from my tomb, the last of leaves erase. Until... For clarification: Nan Ness dueted with me, her lines (most gracious) are in a lighter blue... It was an enjoyable moment... [This message has been edited by Magnus (11-15-2003 06:05 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
better poets than I... I cannot do duets, especially not as awesome as this |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Barry and Nan, such intense passion and spirituality graze these words, sweet friend, you two make such a wonderful poetic team and I think beyond the chasm there's an infinite number of other extraordinary breachs one can make when they look to the sun in the vanishing point! (big hugggssssssss) This is superb, sweet friends, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such beautiful hearts, sweet Barry and Nan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you both! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-15-2003 01:57 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Barry & Nan, I don't know how this slipped to the second page, but I'll put it back where it belongs. Wonderful write. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hello...my screen shows all verses to be in blue, albeit one shade is different ...but I would know Nan's style and yours anywhere...and what a collaboration this is. You keep reaching for the stars, and you collect them every time you duet with a pro, Magnus. I think you were in astronaut in another life... Nan...thank you for pairing yourself with such a romantic!!! |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Exquisite! You two wrote beautifully together. How I elegant I feel just reading this. Patricia |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I am color blind perhaps? sheesh.....kinda looked black and blue...oops...someone gonna beat the whatever outta me? Anyway....gosh, this was fun...each duet is fun...no exception here...she taught me a few words that my brain had no clue about but my dictionary did well.... Thanx to each, Sy, Dixie, Noah and our one and only Lady of SUNSHINE!!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Pattyricia....you snuck in on me ... thanx dear lady...always enjoy giving you a smile or two.... |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
beautifully done as only you and Nan could do. Enjoyed the journey this took me on. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Thank you, kind friends... We had no idea where this was going either... It just sort of took its own direction as it evolved... We had lots of fun... Mucho gratitude to each and every one... |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
FANTASTIC! This just made the #1 must read of the day list! You both did a wonderful job, LOVED IT! LOVED IT! LOVED IT! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Siofra, thanx very much for your words, was an enjoyable venture...certainly a write which makes you clean out your mind's closet and think hard.... EV, Kevin, thanx my friend...appreciate your thoughts much. Pleased that you enjoyed this write...was a challenge for me, and a lot of fun.. |
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