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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-11-14 01:30 AM



How does one say

         isleofview?

such words seem
hollow even

         pinging
echo like

         stone

dropped for
         distance

traveled

d
  o
   w
     n

         well(ing) within

HOME

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vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-11-14 01:34 AM



"How does one say

         isleofview?

such words seem
hollow even

         pinging
echo like

         stone

dropped for
         distance

traveled

d
  o
   w
     n

         well(ing) within

HOME"


Sue?...I love this...my favorite
part is the whole of it...smile

Challenge very well met, me sis...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

pandonov
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2 posted 2003-11-14 01:43 AM


very, very cool
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3 posted 2003-11-14 01:51 AM


You just reset my compass. Thank you.

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4 posted 2003-11-14 08:39 AM


oooh
yeah

..sigh

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5 posted 2003-11-14 08:43 AM


pout

I wanted to do him first!

giggle...

he's got this language all his own, doesn't he? and it always made sense to me.



and looks like I pay the price for being late again...sigh. Back to square for one for me!


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6 posted 2003-11-14 08:46 AM



Excellent, Sue.  As elusive as he is as a writer, I do believe you caught him!

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7 posted 2003-11-14 08:48 AM


I told you this would be an easy one, Sue.  You chose one of the most blatantly obvious styles.  

Although by easy, I mean easy to guess, I don't mean to undermine the accomplishment here.  Notice how nobody's even bothering to say this guy's name?  They don't have to.  

Nice work, babe.

Faith is a fine invention
When gentlemen can see
But microscopes are prudent
In an emergency.
~~~Emily Dickinson

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8 posted 2003-11-14 09:52 AM




Challenge well met Sue, you captured this writer well.


LP, exactly, he has a style all of his own and how lucky for us that he does.

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9 posted 2003-11-14 10:00 AM


nice
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10 posted 2003-11-14 10:39 AM


yes, a unique style.. well done...

good work Sue

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11 posted 2003-11-14 10:48 AM


Bri will be flattered by this offering Susie.

You have written him quite nicely.

Oh! and Susie?  

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12 posted 2003-11-14 12:37 PM



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13 posted 2003-11-14 02:16 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the form of this so much, sweet friend, this reminded me a bit of some of my style too, yay, I love the pinging echo of this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Aenimal
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14 posted 2003-11-14 02:38 PM


when karen said I wanted to do him first i was thinking something else but then remembered this isnt the mature forum. challenge well met
littlewing
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15 posted 2003-11-14 02:53 PM


Thank you everyone, OMG this was so hard
I never imagined . . but mann
was happy you guys could
see what I was attempting to do here

Bri?  I hope you like, I tried
*smile*

Thanks guys
and Ed?
Thanks for the challenge
allowed me to read a lot of
fine poetry I have missed

xxoo


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16 posted 2003-11-14 03:16 PM


Such a cool poem...I loved it!

Eric

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17 posted 2003-11-14 03:30 PM


Sue, this is a neat challenge. I love the way
he writes, and you did it very well!!
Hugs  
Ethel

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18 posted 2003-11-14 04:49 PM


once again clueless as to whom u write of,
i really outta get out more and expand my horizons on pips i guess,
but you write with beautfy nevertheless,
some understood, just dont know of whom u speak.....

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19 posted 2003-11-14 05:58 PM


how wonderful!  you travel a special horizon.

Rf

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20 posted 2003-11-14 06:03 PM


Challenge well met Sue!
You nailed him from the get go.
Hugs~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

brian sites
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21 posted 2003-11-15 02:22 PM



wish I had written this


littlewing
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22 posted 2003-11-15 05:09 PM


Thank you everyone so so much

Bri ahahaha your a funny guy
but thank you, am honored you like
truly honored
I tried not to offend, really I did
you were tough to follow there
*smile*

This was so much fun and a thank
you to Ed for allowing me to see
through another's eyes . . .
xxoo

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