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WildPoet
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0 posted 2003-11-15 05:19 AM


New Soul


A new soul see's life in a fresh way
As waves of sand breaking on the edge
of blue sea's
Of moutains rising in a sky on a new day
And young leaves whistling thru the
Spring breeze
Soft roses shining their brightness on rays
Of sunshine
Purple butterflies toying with a Kitten's wonder
The sound of your voice is like sweet,rich wine
To love you,must feel like warm silk and quiet thunder

To earn respect, Give respect
To live life, nurture life
To enjoy Love, Share Love

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Fire Fairy
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1 posted 2003-11-15 06:06 AM


One of the most luscious poems I've ever read here. I felt the sunshine, I tasted the sweet, rich wine. Thank you for reminding me of the simplictic, pure joy that can only be found within.

Blessings xx

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-11-15 06:19 AM


warm silk and quiet thunder...

wow

PouringJewels
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since 2003-09-18
Posts 158
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3 posted 2003-11-15 06:46 AM


thank you, Thank you. I see a new life, because I can have a new soul. Just start over Julia. Yes!
WildPoet
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4 posted 2003-11-15 01:34 PM


Thank you, Fire Fairy,Passing Shadows and Pouring Jewels!

This is one of my Favorites and it warms my
heart that all of you find something special in it!

Thank you

WildPoet

To earn respect, Give respect
To live life, nurture life
To enjoy Love, Share Love

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-11-15 02:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, such fanciful imagery and lush heavenly joy fills these romantic words, yay! (big hugggsssssss) May your new replenished soul forever embrace the simple pleasures of life, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10
Posts 205
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6 posted 2003-11-16 12:08 PM


Thank you, Mistletoe Angel
It makes me happy to see your replys. Their so colorful and active!

Thank you

WildPoet

To earn respect, Give respect
To live life, nurture life
To enjoy Love, Share Love

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