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A Poet's Pine
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A Poet's Pine |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA 
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Bedtime roses cascaded on my bed Calls for no reason, mid afternoon Surprise deliveries, I’m not asking for the moon Just one passion filled I Love you, echoing in my head I want someone to pen their love for me Someone to give their jacket when I am without Someone to leave Hershey kisses on my car Spelling I love you….and make it feel like a shout Someone to send me a card in the mail Just because Someone to sit and try to recall my every detail I want to be wooed I want him to think I AM the cats meow To be the first conscious thought upon opening his eyes Hey, I want someone to give ME the dryer fresh towel When apart, I want him to ache in my absence To pine for me What? He will breath without me? I want, I need To be His very pulse To be Adored To be The ONE For someone else There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
First... you have to give all that in order to receive it all back... then you can sit under the pines and recite poetry... with him |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
thanks for commenting...and that is exactly why I wrote this...I have...given this and more.  There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful...and you only ask for life's simple pleasures. I do hope you have or find that special someone. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The right one will come along. The moment you quit looking.  Don't give up your dreams. |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
Don't get me wrong...I m with someone..I just wish he was more romantic...thats all. thank you so much for your comments and compliments. Feedback is something I truly love. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
Enchantress: hugs back at ya hun! thank you. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sweetie...show him this poem! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Yes!! That will do it!  |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
OO goodness...I don't think I can do that...lol..i mean...I want him to do it on his own. Maybe i ll post it on my web site and he will see it..i dunno.. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Can he read your mind?  slip it under his pillow... |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
sunshine: hehe..i guess he can't huh? i ll think about it. thanks everyone for your input on this one..as it is very special to me. |
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