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In Soft Gather
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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In Soft Gather ~*Marge Tindal*~ You came in soft gather of hard lessons from the past Hoping to undo the ache that the break had cast~ The pleas of please forgive me fell fervently from your lips Not realizing that before you asked I already had~ As I looked into your eyes watching you fall apart I knew that the pain of letting you go would not be easy on my heart~ So I held you very close one time more for love’s sake Knowing that we will meet again not as lover’s … but as friends And we will cherish that moment foreverly~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Marge, this one actually made me sad, but it's a beautiful write. Bec  "I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20 |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is the Marge I know... tenderly so. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
Excellent Love ya, Betty |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
So sad this poem, but so loving also. Beautiful write Marge and lets not forget the sadness. Love Bon-Bon  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This absolutely aches Marge. So painfully beautiful. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
loved the love in this marge... jwesley |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ah, Marge, this was hard to read my friend. The love, tenderness and heartache touched me so deeply. I hope it will work this way. Hugs and loves, Marti “Prayer makes the heart large enough until it can contain God’s gift of Himself.” |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
hugssss sweet lady, I never like to see you blue..... Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The pleas of please forgive me fell fervently from your lips Not realizing that before you asked I already had~ I wish!!! Forgiveness is a trait to be admired...your poem made my heart race and sigh out loud. Thank you for shedding the softest light and touching on a subject that makes all the difference in the world. Peace to you Marge~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
...if I only had half your strength... |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
What a beautiful poem... Neeraja |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
I appreciate each of you for reading this little piece of my heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The pleas of please forgive me fell fervently from your lips Not realizing that before you asked I already had~ Having needed forgiveness before, I know what a gift this is... This sad write is so loving... so excellent. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
'tis another fine one you have penned from the heart. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Fantastic.. With feeling, the way it should be. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I believe I can feel this one...  M |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Marge, your beautiful soul is showing! The Universe has a way of rewarding such beneficence. This generosity of spirit will not go unnoticed.  ~ As you sow Dear One, may you receive back tenfold or more... Loving, healing hugs, EarthyOne |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
A very beautiful and moving piece of writing here Marge. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Yes, this is a sweet sorrow. Well done! SG |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
A peice of your heart so sweet to read even though it brought a tear or two of remember.  Dee Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are. Clearwater |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Marge, this sounds so sad, but beautifully written. I hope you are ok. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My deepest thanks to each of you for the kindness of your replies~ Sincerely~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
very tasty, Marge... especially liked the "foreverly" thanks Daniel [This message has been edited by Tramp Poet (11-25-2003 07:35 PM).] |
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