Open Poetry #29 |
The importance of the wait |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Whenever I'm with you, the traffic lights make sense. They seem to blink a message -- magenta, amber, cyan -- a secret code, if you will. Especially late at night, hanging lonely from their posts. Can barely see the street sign where we are. Within our warm car, idling, waiting, readying, staging. And that is what they say. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Man, oh man, I love the way you write! This one made me smile and nod in agreement. Ordinary things can be turned extraordinary, under the "right" circumstances. hugs, Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
well said though i hope your wait lessened. godspeed northward |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Mike... hope the code when broken finds you the words you hope to find.. enjoyed this bud.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) For someone alone, a red light can be a heartache, but with someone, it is heaven to get to hear ones heart beat! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michael, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent metaphor, Mike. Do it again. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Your inking so impresses me ... this is just wonderful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
very nice write |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Thanks everyone. This is me peeking my head above a long, vast depression. The weather's not too bad. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you writing does amaze.... Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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