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Enigma
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kadena, Japan

0 posted 2003-11-13 02:59 AM



3’S   COMPANY


I long for the day, when we can walk in peace together
I’m sure in our next life, we’ll walk in peace forever…
No more violence, just perfect harmony
No more silence, no fear of harm 2 me…

When that day comes, believe I’ll except it with arms open.
Unless I got plans… I’m playn, relax, I’m just joken
2 walk with Jesus, up in Heaven above
2 have him 2 greet us, with a kiss and hug…
I couldn’t imagine…
It’s 2 good 2 B true…
Forever in peace, together…
Jesus, me and u.

Only God Can Judge Me

© Copyright 2003 Robert J. Turner - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
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1 posted 2003-11-13 02:41 PM


I really enjoyed this read a lot.

Cold hands means a warm heart

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10
Posts 205
California
2 posted 2003-11-13 02:54 PM


Great! I should call my dad!

WildPoet

froggy
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Michigan
3 posted 2003-11-13 08:44 PM


Nice read.I enjoyed it.

:-)

Enigma
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kadena, Japan
4 posted 2003-11-14 08:26 PM


Thank U all very much
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5 posted 2003-11-14 09:21 PM


this would be such a touching poem, if you dropped the slang....
Greeneyes~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

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