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Passionately Mine
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Passionately Mine I watched you walk back in. I couldn't conceal my grin. Yes, I can see you are a treasure. And I want to bring you all life's pleasure. You are the only one I seek To make my love complete. From the moment I saw you I pledged my heart to be true. From that course I will not stray. Because I love you more each day. So never doubt my passion or zeal. For what we have is so real! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Nice, enjoyed the ead. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful piece here Scorpio! She is one lucky lady to receive love so deep. It's so good to read you here more often.  ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is so beautifully expressed, scorpio. Enjoyed this.  Hugs, ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
There is never any doubt that your poetic zeal spills over into your daily life |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ooooh, this is so romantic scorpio! A lovely write indeed. Enjoyed. Chris Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
From that course I will not stray. Because I love you more each day. So never doubt my passion or zeal. For what we have is so real! Scorpio, if you didn't feel this love from your heart, you would never be able to write about it so well. I'm glad to see you here more, too.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Scorpio, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you are a true and natural giver and you will awlays make your love happy! (sigh) This is a true gem, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Scorpio, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
methinks Cupid has an empty quiver if this poem is anything to go by ... as for me this left me aquiver  Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I appreciate your support, Sy.. Enchantress, thank you for your kind words (and the kiss)...I'll work at writing more.. Thank you, vlraynes...I'm pleased you enjoyed.. Karilea, thank you...sometimes my daily life prevents me from sitting down and writing...but I do my best to please my muse.. Thank you, Chris...I'm humbled by your words.. I'll do my best Ethel...thank you.. Noah, your support and comments mean a great deal to me...thank you.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
You slipped by me,Kethry...you flatter me...thank you very much.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nicely expressed,,, |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such love is evident in the words you chose here. Pretty piece. TD |
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LiquidMidnight Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 50 |
I think it takes great talent to write a straight-forward style of poem, but yet make it unique and poetic at the same time. That's what I really like about this piece. It's very cut and dry without being cliche or amateurish. It would make a great poem for a wedding. |
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Chrissypooh Member
since 2002-02-19
Posts 80Canada |
beautiful |
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