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Into Tomorrow |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Something different tonight so mesmerizing the look in dark sapphire eyes reminiscent of yesterday when feelings of love didn't have to play hide and seek behind clouds of uncertainty and the reflections seen in pools of blue was that of a heart being held again in the warmth of sharing. The chill of time began slowly fading into the past~ in soft light of night new hopes and dreams were cast. Gazes locked, searching deeper than ever before thoughts entwining, two souls soaring side by side into tomorrow. It's better than I could have planned.. it's made me who I am... {Trace Adkins} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-13-2003 10:05 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"and the reflections seen in pools of blue was that of a heart being held again in the warmth of sharing." and.... "Gazes locked, searching deeper than ever before thoughts entwining, two souls soaring side by side into tomorrow." So full of hope..so very uplifting to the soul. Beautiful my friend...simply beautiful. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (11-13-2003 10:09 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"when feelings of love didn't have to play hide and seek behind clouds of uncertainty? ~ Superbly expressive! It is so great to have you back! ~ and in such fine poetic form!  Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"when feelings of love didn't have to play hide and seek behind clouds of uncertainty" excellent poetry.....:-) _____ice_____ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirt~ Ahhhh, I like the all of this~ 'two souls soaring side by side into tomorrow' EXCELLENT~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hide and seek gets boring after awhile...doesn't it? nice write...very soothing |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks to all of you for your wonderful comments and never ending friendship. I still say there is just never enough of time to spend here among friends... |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
This could well fit the Masquerade challenge as well. Very moving. Thank you, dear. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Donna, this is beautiful, sweet friend, love is not just looking at each other, but looking out in the distance together and holding hands, knowing tomorrow brings much more in store! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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