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Magnus
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0 posted 2003-11-13 08:16 PM


I lay there, upon sparkles of silicon midgets,
as my last bath washed over my toes....Pass
the soap please?   Star laden skies blanketing
the dimple of my chest, little pricks causing
a stir, a shrug...

Where are you my lucid moon?  Why aren’t
you above, staring down?  So tall above the
mountains tops....so low upon the kiss of sea.

You gave me passion upon the last rise as
risen, I rose to find....You gave a glimpse
of love’s blush, lying before me...you gave
ecstacy as the boil of us overflowed.

Come again my friend,  Luna of this light...
Let the smile glint of blindness as I blink,
as I sink slowing into the warmth of a
maiden’s arms....and stars tickle,  as
basking love giggles....giggles endlessly...


© Copyright 2003 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-11-13 08:50 PM


Barry..this style suits you so well.
Soon my friend..we shall du-et again.
For now I drift and heal.  You are a dear!
~Smiles, Sighs and Endless Giggles~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-11-13 10:11 PM


Barry,
Happy deams my friend and well done.

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-11-13 10:49 PM


Magnus~

'Come again my friend,  Luna of this light...
Let the smile glint of blindness as I blink,
as I sink slowing into the warmth of a
maiden’s arms....and stars tickle,  as
basking love giggles....giggles endlessly...'


I LOVE THIS !!!
I don't know about those 'giggles' ... but if you listen closely, from the South ... you will undoubtedly hear a *sigh*~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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just out of reach
4 posted 2003-11-13 11:04 PM


Dear Magnus, once again you have taken my breath away with your words. hugs, Chris

Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore



    

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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-13 11:07 PM


she's there...give 'er some time
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