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You took it all with you
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You took it all with you |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
On today I knew you would leave and today I knew I would breath this day took forever to come the pain I awaited feels numb Today feels like everyday your absence did not make me pray your leaving left no tracks to find you left me, but I did not mind you took it all with you left nothing behind you took it all with you but I did not mind |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of something my lover would say |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
I really like this...i have needed these words although I wouldn't have meant them...at the time..I would have liked to have said them. There are only three beings worth of respect; the priest, the solider and the poet; To know, To Kill and to create. |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Sounds like me when I dumped Greg for all his lying. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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