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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-13 12:03 PM

Cast Me To The Shells

awake
has no dreams
it rides
the tempts tide
dancing upon
the ocean floor
there is
no place to hide
my feet recognize
the pain
so cast me
to the shells
steps in
salty waves
turns red
to pink pastels

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-11-13 12:07 PM

Gently elegant.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

2 posted 2003-11-13 12:08 PM

very pretty

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-11-13 12:29 PM

sometimes I wonder what you see when you look out on life...most times I know by your writings

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-11-14 11:42 PM

dancing upon
the ocean floor
there is
no place to hide
my feet recognize
the pain

Yes, yes, the ocean is all that... if I must endure the pleasure and the pain, there is no place I'd rather be.

Thank you Ms. Slick~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2003-11-14 11:56 PM

(smiles) Oh Helen, this is just beautiful, sweet friend, the ocean is the cradle of life in my mind and no better place depicts the beauty in its absolute than the sea! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is marvelous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-11-17 09:19 PM

I love the way you rotate your point of view without seeming to do so....you are indeed the queen of short lines!

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NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2003-11-17 09:42 PM

Helen, your writing always fascinates me and you see things that most do not. How I would love to meet you.

Hugs, Marti

“Prayer makes the heart large enough until it can contain God’s gift of Himself.”
Blessed Mother Teresa

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2003-11-17 09:49 PM

"there is
no place to hide"

so much said within this short line

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