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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
A gang of them, crowd the coffee house Porch, sit at summer tables Covered with frost, not linen Giving the finger to November, Whose bad mood does not phase them; In spite of the cold, they are glee-filled. * An early winter, wind is warmed By the laughter, of these girls gone wild High on clouds of burley, and bright Washed down by double-shot latte; * The smoke and coffee increasing Their heart-beats and speed-rates Of giggles, incessantly mixed, Producing a static chatter. * end |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
ice, I enjoyed the scene you painted here. Nicely done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehe...I remember the days |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
interesting |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
..."wind is warmed By the laughter, of these girls gone wild" ~ Reminds me of my nursing school days!   EA |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it my friend. :-) |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Thank you.....:-) Pilgrimage Seymour Tabin Passing Shadows Brad Majors Earth Angel And Froggy For reading and commenting.....:-) ____ice_____ |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Ya caught 'em in the act! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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