A Stolen Blanket from Snow

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Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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0 posted 2003-11-10 04:03 AM

   It was a night to be snuggled and warm
   when the blanket was abruptly lifted.
   In cold hearted selfish words I said,
   "Grrr. Why'd you steal myyyy blanket?'

   With a broken snore, but still asleep
   Profound words he didn't know he said.
   "I'm just Snow, looking for shelter..."
   Thoughts of chill ran through my head.

      "Where does this Snow
      find his shelter?
      Like snow usually does,
      why doesn't everyone share
          their cover?"

[This message has been edited by Sadelite (11-12-2003 09:05 PM).]

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-11-10 08:22 AM

Sadelite~
Well that's a neat perspective~
Enjoyed~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Sadelite
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2 posted 2003-11-10 08:41 AM

Thanks, Marge. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Sadelite

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-11-10 10:34 AM

sensational write

Sadelite
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4 posted 2003-11-12 08:56 PM

LeeJ,
Why, thank you. I thought that those words spoken in sleep were pretty interesting, too!
Sadelite

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2003-11-13 02:10 PM

pretty cool

Sadelite
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6 posted 2003-11-13 02:20 PM

Passing Shadows,
   Really cool--about 32 degrees!   Thanks for taking a look at this and for your feedback.
                          Sadie

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10

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California

7 posted 2003-11-13 03:02 PM

That was Fun! I have to go turn the heat up, now!

Thanks

WildPoet

Sadelite
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8 posted 2003-11-13 03:42 PM

Wild Poet,
You just do that--I'll race you! Today was pretty cold where I'm from. Thanks for your comments. Have a good day.
Sadelite

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

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Ohio

9 posted 2003-11-13 05:49 PM

I just had to stop and read. We had our first sprinkle of snow today. I wonder if it was looking for shelter because the wind was so high strung? Huffing and puffing blowing all about.
Good one.
Love Bon-Bon

Sadelite
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10 posted 2003-11-13 09:44 PM

Bonnie J,
Thanks for dropping by and sharing your comments. By Golly, I think you may be right about the high strung wind, blowing snow everywhere!
Sadelite

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