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Keth
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since 2003-11-10
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0 posted 2003-11-13 10:03 AM


twisted and tempting

precious and pain

dark and daring

venom and vein

waking and warning

terror and tool

resting and raising

fire and fool

hiding and hearing

binding and bare

seeking and singing

cover and care

I don't want it
I just need it
To breathe
To feel
To know I'm alive.


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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
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1 posted 2003-11-13 12:05 PM


I like the couplings here, especially 'fire and fool'.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2003-11-13 12:47 PM


very cool write
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